persuasive writing/due Thursday


On term 1 we did a persuasive writing. When i did it i learned how to do paragraph. How: i used the plan at the start to make the perfect paragraph, i think it was good.This writing took about 3 days  for 2 days i did the plan for 1 day i wrote the story. Sometimes for the plan i went to the workshop to get info how to do the writing. My challenge was to make the writing in time, when i finish it , it was perfect. I was thinking it was hard but now it is alright.

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